Sisters Need Love Too

best of bouth worlds

It was just a bite hard to figerout how was how at rhe start,But other than that not bad. Keep it going Shood get better?

great!

Excellent set-up for further adventures. Ignore the lout who did not like it.

MORE

It works for me. Write more. I wish I had his sister.

Wow!!

I have been reading from this site for a few years now and I have never entered a comment. I felt compelled to do so after reading this. Incredibly hot and horny.
Great job. Painted an amazingly hot scenario!!!

Didnt do much for me. She has zero redeeming qualities that I found myself wondering why bother with the rest of it. You could have given her a better backstory. Nothing was erotic about all the handies she gave or the lesbian lover. It made me despise her. Cheating in most instances is a pretty weak crutch.

HOT

Ive had sex with my sister off and on since we married others and its the best sex ever.Thanks for sharing this story.

Keep it going

Great Start

Let's see how Big Brother handle's it. as for 2 years w/o sex what was that about?

hummmm where will this take us?

I kinda liked the way it jumped right in there, the trust between siblings. And asking for help. now lets get hot!!!!

Cheating

Constant cheating is not hot.
It's just sad and demeaning.
Broken people who can't connect properly.

Hmmm

Look forward to the continuation of your tale....

A good lead in

we need the rest of the story.

Good build up, then just falls short and flat. Next time try actually writing a story instead of whatever this is.

Your story has great potential, you'll have to keep the details going through Ella sucking, making out and/or screwing her brother. That way it brings the whole chapter together and makes sense. You need some physical details about them both too now and they should just do each other well as they both obviously have needs not met by their spouses. This story can really get hotter if you go this route. Hope for another chapter very soon.

wiyh my sister

I had sex with my sister a long time ago we didn't think it would happen one day my sis caught me playing with myself she took off her panties an started to play with her pussy we got carried away she wanted to play with me that's when it all started we started to rub our bodies tighter my cock slipped between her legs all of a sudden my cock slipped in her about two inches she was hot an tight her eyes got real big I pulled out then about a week later one night she came to my room an got in bed with me she told me that she wanted to feel it again I said that shouldn't do it but I couldn't help myself she spread her legs I got on top an placed my cock at her pussy an pushed in ai least two inches as we laid there she said I want all of you in me that was all it took I pushed all the way in now she wasn't a virgin any more then we really started to fuck then I told that I was about to cum she said so am I lets cum toghter an did we ever lucky she didn't get pregnant then we started using condoms now we are up in years we still fuck only we don't use condoms any more

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2. Then, there are those people who criticize simply for the sake of criticizing. We all know people like them. Here, they are immediately recognized when offering up their nastiness with an "Anonymous" signature.

agree

I agree with truffle in that there should be more

Well written

I was somewhat put off by the indiscriminate and constant cheating on her husband. The thing is, even with that it was a good story and well written. It could stand alone, allowing your readers to imagine what happened, or you will continue the story. I pity the brother. When sister tires of him she will put him aside for another man as she's done before with her illicit lovers. He seems to have marital problems of his own. But I am rambling...Thanks for sharing.
PS: Please stop the brother calling his sister by her full name. It's okay once, but after that it is cumbersome and borders on the ridiculous.