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Close Shave
Great story and well written. Would love to read more of this educational endeavor.
Pleasant
Average story with plenty of typo's. Even the story description has a typo. They happen just often enough to distract from the story.
"From Which I came" is adequate.
you don't need an "in from"!!!
I liked your story very much. It is VERY ORIGINAL, I would say unique. I gave it a 5- [(☆☆☆☆☆-) 4.6/5.0 = 92% = A]
Looking forward to reading your next story.
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