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by jenorma201201/18/17

ok

the writing of this was pretty good, but I think in my opinion you went a little over board with the sex,I know you described the way you meet her and that was good and the ending was alright also all in all a good story a little rushed but still good

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by ARavenInTheNight02/05/17

Pretty Good

A little overboard with the screaming but a long sex scene that worked well for encompassing most of the story body.

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