by maestro84
Damn, I can not believe it, a writer actually finished a story. They are in the 10-15% who actually complete their story. God, if their only were more writers like you. I gave you 5-STARS for each chapter because it is an excellent story with an excellent plot and character development. Keep up the good writing. Retired Army NCO
Good story. I enjoyed it a lot. Only issue is, how could our heros be so irresponsible as to leave the alien entity behind where it will obviously infect someone else?
They thought it died in the frozen water, and left room for a sequel if I decide to continue the story.
You should definitely do a sequel. This time with a high school girl named Jesse (it's a random name). The symbiote bonds with her bra underwear but this time when Jesse goes to sleep, it covers her entire body in a black suit and takes control of her body and goes to fuck on their honry victims.
Some breast/ass expansion inculded.
Don't take this seriously. It just a suggestion. Please do a sequel series.
I have considered it, like having someone find it the creature in the spring time and because the weather is much warmer the creature isn't looking for warmth as much so it could change the scenario a bit, perhaps make it less deadly too. Have lot's of ideas, ut have to wait and see
I enjoy this series very much. Will we see more stories with symbiotes from you?