Temptation, Resistance, Surrender

How sad

Both women love the sex, but also feel trapped. Tale of quiet desperation indeed.

Thanks for sharing.

Pretty Good !!!

With a bit of tweaking and polishing this has the makings for a short video or movie.
Very easily, dialogue for each can be developed to create an almost finished and ready to go script. Just an opinion... keep writing.
Sam Barrow

very good

Actually, I think it was very good. Well written, and slowly led up to the plot, which in my mind could have gone either way. Yes, this could make a great movie, and hopefully, there is more to come.

needed one thing more

Mike was a fucking goddamn rapist and if John was any kind of a brother and heard her say no. He should have pulled him off and beat him till he pissed blood.

Fabulous

I agree with 1DireWolf, as a brother I too would have beat shit out of a rapist. Other than that a wonderful story

Never a foursome ..but

Never a foursome ...but a great story bringing back beautiful memories of my own sister and I. Thanks.

A brother that lets his sister be raped, I don't think so.

True story???

VERY interesting story. So different that it could actually be true.
There is just enough angst and desperation that it could be real.
Is it?????

Great

I gave you a 5. Next chapter 18 years later would be very interesting. Would be nice if the whole family watches as Susanna will have sexual intercourse with her son.

nice story

A real page turner. well written. believable. I loved how you avoided the obligatory specs on cock size and pussy description. nicely done.

Wonderful story

I have often wished that my sister and I had discovered another sibling couple when we were all in college, so that we could go on "legitimate" double dates, and then when in the privacy of our car, or at a hotel room, we could swap and wind up with our siblings as our sex partners. This story is similar, and quite believable, except for what was essentially the rape while John watched. In the real world, everything else is quite believable, but I doubt any brother would stand by watching while his sister was fucked against her will. Hope to read more adventures of this foursome.