A Nice Surprised

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Where was the incest?

Bring the son into the mix mother can have three cocks at once

Unreadable trash

Get an editor and at least try to make sense. This is hardly a sad attempt at writing. So many grammar errors in the first paragraph (And title).

Stick to reading

New Winner!!! Negative Five Stars!!!!

Never mind where's the incest...more important, where is the story?

Couple years ago I read a story on here that I swore nobody would ever beat as the worst submission on Literotica.... My apologies, I was wrong!!!

This 'story' for lack of a better word, now captures the number one spot as the worst piece of crap I have ever read on here or any other site for that matter.

NEGATIVE FIVE STARS

What crap!

Couldn't get through more than a few paragraphs. You need some English classes. And you need some sort of story. Maybe you should just be a reader?

1*

illiterate shit.

1*

And uou're lucky for that. Had I finished the tale, it would have been worse. The Josh dude was a moron

Pleeeeese stop writing!

Yes please do try some thing else. May be cooking.
You do not even seem to understand as to what incest is!

No, juat no...

I'm sorry to say that, if you cannot even get the title grammatically correct, you are not going to succeed as an author. I didn't even bother to read any further.

a nice surprised

u r n s

Written by a 6 year old

I guess you couldnt be bothered with grammar or story plannning.
This looks like it was written by a teenager with no idea of planning or supposition.
Stick to another job because you cant write a story for shit!!!!.

thre should be

an extra section for cockhold i guess...
bad writing 1/5

1*

Just for the title.

Maybe the new format of the site will allow "Zero" ratings. THIS story sure deserves an 0.

You fucked up just about everything you could fuck up on this piece of garbage. Even down to the misspelling of the title.

I remember AdrenaLynn

She was a singer back in the forties I think.

absolute rubbish fuck!!!!!

WONDERFUL!!!!

I want to thank you for your story. I have a severely retarded friend and I read it to him. He said that it was the best story ever. Then he asked if he could blow my Rotweiler. I told him no and made him eat a cat terd to pay for his insolence.

I think that my comment was way, way better than your piece of crap "story".

crap

Gave up on first paragraph, dont usually comment but this deserves a minus figure !

Ditto CRAP

Your lack of ability to construct a coherent sentence is mind boggling!!!!!!!!

I really disliked this.

Not only is she a remorseless cheating whore, cucking
her husband, she has no qualms about showing
how much a skank she is right in front of her son.
*2* for the writing effort.

WOW

Ignore the negative comments! I really loved your story. It needs some editing done though and I can help you with that if you want me to. Otherwise I loved the whole story line and hope you write more on the story.

This story is under the wrong category. There is no incest invovled in this story plus the story kind of sucked anyway so I gave you a 1.