All Comments on 'New Ways, finally?'

...on here, capture things perfectly in your unique way. Enjoyed this, read it more than once.

especially:

I love the living

dreams that happen

in pink glows,

lit by saffire

brimstone Taken

riven to the core

images. This is really good work.

...always enjoy watching Razz play with his words and this is no exception. Some great alliteration and well chosen lines.

and the movenment. If that's the point great stuff. But I need some help understanding what you're saying- call me thick, or dense. (just don't call me late for dinner) :)