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FormerReaderFormerReaderover 7 years ago
Excellent Chapter

I like they complement each other as jedi: one stronger in the Force, the other a better mechanic. I don't know if you played SWTOR but one character said something appropriate here "the Jedi always talk about how love makes one selfish, but they don't realize it can make people work together and more compassionate too".

It takes a while to undo indoctrination, BUT once they have changed their minds, they shouldn't wrestle with second-guessing. As before, love the SWTOR nods. On to Ord Mantell!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Love the story so far.

Can't wait for the next chapter.

Why don't people write about sith?

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Chapter 3

That's great. I can't wait to read chapter 3

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