Stray Kitty

wrong category

this is lesb story 1*

What an idiotic bunch of crap!!! MINUS 5*!!

What thats crap for?? You are publishing on "loving wives"! Where is the connection??

still cheating.
a willing cuckold story i think should be in the gay male section though.
just my opinion

Yikes.

This is so gay.

How about a 1

For the skinny idiot that thinks if you don't like something and say so... that tbey need to impose their tastless style of writing and declare you're a fat anything that "cums" in their brainless void.

This story is worthless and when compared to well written stories by good authors, falls far shorter than a 1 expresses.... but even with a negative scale abuses of the system would occur. So folks will always comment and try to make everyone believe that they know better than abyone else what is good for everyone..

Didn't Hitler have an idea along those lines at some time in history? How'd that turn out?

How about a 5

That's how.

If

If you had finished this story, you might have received decent grades. Why hasn't wifey challenged Ben on his cheating for 6 years? Did Charlie cheat in response or did she start the double cheating routine? Why stay with a cheating hubby who apparently does not satisfy his wife anyway?

I don't get it. What was the plot? Was there supposed to be some story or drama or suspense or somthing?

If Ben is out fucking then how is he back at the house? Or is this some kind of role play where Ben pretends he is fucking around so his wife can fuck her girl friend while he watches? But then why would she close the door and lock it? Apparently she wants privacy with her Lesbian lover, but doesn't need to hide it from her husband? I'm so confused. Why does he fuck around only every other Tuesday?

Wrong category

I got lost in the beginning. When Ben left how did she get to amber. Was she next door. Poor writing.

Pointless

Was there a story?

Good First Story***

You should think about a part two. Thanks for sharing,

Is this a story?

Is this a story? Who are these people? Is the lover girl an Amazon? To "push him out and shut and lock the door of his own bedroom", it's the only explanation. This is like verbalize the verb cheat: He cheats, she cheats, they cheated! 1*

What a mess

It would really help if your female protagonist had a conventionally feminine name. I believe Charlie and Amber are having a lesbian go, but looking at the other comments, I'm not the only one confounded. You're onto something, but is it what you meant?