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...always
a delight to rise in the morn and find a gem like this from you Cordelia :)
Jealous...
...of the ability to "form"!...and to wrap it around 'meaning'. Impressive.
one of the best
sonnets that I've read in an extremely long time.
Beautiful and the form does not get in the way. The lines are so natural that they lie gently against the form--belonging and content.
I despise you for your sonnet writing ability, sweet Cordelia. :)
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Inspired and inspiring. I agree with Eve, you use this form well here. Perfect.
blue and beautiful
a world that would leave you alone
is not a world I want to call home
Sweet Cordelia. This should be a song,
"Sweet Cordelia."
Squeeze my hand.
smiles softly...
As has been previously expressed, i envy your ability to fit feelings to form and wind them together in what feels like an effortless fashion.
As usual, ridiculously boring
Yawn.
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