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if my brother
had EVER come into MY room like that, I would have been the only one leaving alive!! but the last lines say so very much...dressed in guilt and shame. yeah, I have worn those clinging tacky garments before, it sucks..thanks for this poem :)
A scary...
...taboo, handled with the pen of a poet whose control is growing by the day. Each piece of yours I read grows sharper, cleaner of line and word. This poet's voice is growing...expanding quickly!
well written
But I question this being placed under Erotic. Even though it has mature subject matter, I still see it as non erotic, without any real pleasure. This is painful poem handled very well.
Well done on....
...a tricky subject. (looks around for a rant from anonymous)
PERCHANCE TO SLEEP AND DREAM
for an encore. TK U MLJ LV NV
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