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Your verse...
...continues to stregthen all the times, in every way. A fine offering.
some
nice word choices and couplings here.
and a nice rhythm
thank you
Plenty of Alliteration
The poem flows
well aided by
similar sounds.
I only object strongly
to "forest primeval".
has a nice
flow and I liked the thoughts behind the message....thanks...blue
very nice
I read the poem first, comments, then I respond. So, I see that forest primeval also didn't work for someone else. Try reading it without primeval. It flows much better.
Still, a very nice poem. Thank you!
Thanks
for the wonderful poem. Paints a wonderful picture of Pagan celebration. Well done.
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