GT,
You do a pretty passable job of spinning a yarn. I gave it 50 stars cause I voted 10 ten times. (Just kidding. Unless you think I should.) Nicely open ended. I will try to wait patiently whilst you refresh yourself and decide where to take this tale. But, I will hunt you down and hurt you if you don't come back to it at some point in the reasonable future. And I get to decide what is reasonable although I will consult with your friend BB1958 on that since he has a thorough understanding of the toll and time involved.
I keep saying it that you outdo yourself with each new chapter and one more you proved me right, this was once more an outstanding addition to an already superb tale. Not only did you up the ante with the corporate drama but added a few spins to the romance side as well with the wedding, new bae for Bobby who proved useful, and some vocal doubts about Dee Dee & Georges public image. And the ending with a standing invitation from Van Rijn was yet another master stroke to you plan for this tale.
To be completely honest I was expecting a lot worse from those Iphigenia scoundrel, glad to see it not going there for it would then turn really nasty for them (or would that be a good thing since they would get served what they deserved?).
Gave it the obligatory 5* and now I really look forward the future of this story!
P.S. Sorry if I missed any hidden gems, had a really tough day and the story popped up at 2 a.m. local time.
Jack's right; this open-ending is all well and good, and I'm all too aware of the fact you're busily exploring other story threads and situations, but this is truly an involving and attention-capturing tale, and needs to keep the momentum going. It's a mark of how good the story is that I never thought I'd ever say that about a team of accountants, seeing as my accountants are a tribe of little grey men in little grey suits and neat little brown shoes, who only come out after dark and carry their change in little grey shovel-purses and never, ever start a remark without clearing their throats and steepling their fingers, so well done you.
I'm still holding out hope that at some point Robin or Tommy gets to violently insert the traffic cone into some deserving individual, or maybe hammer a large porcupine up where the sun don't shine...
5 stars for once again keeping me engrossed and interested despite my goldfish-like attention span.
English
Another Home Run
GT,
You do a pretty passable job of spinning a yarn. I gave it 50 stars cause I voted 10 ten times. (Just kidding. Unless you think I should.) Nicely open ended. I will try to wait patiently whilst you refresh yourself and decide where to take this tale. But, I will hunt you down and hurt you if you don't come back to it at some point in the reasonable future. And I get to decide what is reasonable although I will consult with your friend BB1958 on that since he has a thorough understanding of the toll and time involved.
Ever higher goes the quality and the suspense
I keep saying it that you outdo yourself with each new chapter and one more you proved me right, this was once more an outstanding addition to an already superb tale. Not only did you up the ante with the corporate drama but added a few spins to the romance side as well with the wedding, new bae for Bobby who proved useful, and some vocal doubts about Dee Dee & Georges public image. And the ending with a standing invitation from Van Rijn was yet another master stroke to you plan for this tale.
To be completely honest I was expecting a lot worse from those Iphigenia scoundrel, glad to see it not going there for it would then turn really nasty for them (or would that be a good thing since they would get served what they deserved?).
Gave it the obligatory 5* and now I really look forward the future of this story!
P.S. Sorry if I missed any hidden gems, had a really tough day and the story popped up at 2 a.m. local time.
As interesting and involving as ever
Jack's right; this open-ending is all well and good, and I'm all too aware of the fact you're busily exploring other story threads and situations, but this is truly an involving and attention-capturing tale, and needs to keep the momentum going. It's a mark of how good the story is that I never thought I'd ever say that about a team of accountants, seeing as my accountants are a tribe of little grey men in little grey suits and neat little brown shoes, who only come out after dark and carry their change in little grey shovel-purses and never, ever start a remark without clearing their throats and steepling their fingers, so well done you.
I'm still holding out hope that at some point Robin or Tommy gets to violently insert the traffic cone into some deserving individual, or maybe hammer a large porcupine up where the sun don't shine...
5 stars for once again keeping me engrossed and interested despite my goldfish-like attention span.
Will
Outstanding story
Well written. It calls for more chapters. Thanks
Accounting.
Who knew accounting could be such fun! I can only add to the superlatives below.
Outstandingly!
Another brilliant chapter. Looking forward to the next one.
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