by ksha
Thank you for sharing your stories with us, ksha, you write really well. Five stars and Season's Greetings to you!
"He turns to see one of his coworkers standing behind him with her head close to his looking at his screen. Startled, he closes his search and shakily asks what she is doing. She lets out a short chuckle and returns to whatever she was doing previously."
It's all pure present tense description, and it's annoying as hell to read.
While this story is mostly about him. How about we learn how she gets pleased over time.