Operation Fuck Me Daddy Pt. 01

Nice start

I like where this is going

Umm

I'm hard...where's the rest?! lol

Yikes

So hot! I'm having dirty thoughts

Good start !!!

Hello ChocGirl - Wonderfully exciting start! Keep on as am looking forward to following parts. Sam Barrow

A tour de force of an intro!

This is such a tremendous start to a series. I personally can only type one handed at the moment. I hope the next instalment isn't months away. Please, please and please keep writing.

Good start but I can't even rate this. Nothing of significance happened in this one page. It's good but not enough

A great start to what could become a great story.

I liked the start of this story. It is making me want to read the next installment. You mention a couple of times that you have "brown skin"... Are you well tanned or a curvy black girl "Gina"?

Great Start!

I'll start by admitting that this isn't what I'm into (the whole Daddy's Girl thing) but I can appreciate the prose and the strong characterisation.I think the story flows really well and the prose style is so engaging and controlled. I look forward to reading part II simply for the quality of the writing rather than getting turned on.

Great Introduction.

I'm about to start chapter two and looking forward to it.

my daughter also.

my wife said its time we taught our daughter about sex.they had a long talk&were looking at me.that night we were in bed&daughter came in our bedroom naked.my wife said get up here I will teach you what to do.i was shocked our daughter got on me&was squirting on me.she went right to it.the wife dident have to show her anything.she said next I will teach her bi.