The whole thing starts because the husband, whom she loves so dearly, isn't giving her any, but when he tries she says, "Not tonight" and rolls away?
I just wish people would drop the inane, "Oh I love my spouse so much" BS when it is ALWAYS followed by actions that say the opposite.
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Anonymous06/16/04
Poor Old Anonymous in USA
The story has its faults, but your adverse criticism makes the sweeping statement that "I love you" carries a whole packet of well-defined meanings together with inevitable and inescapable follow-up behaviour patterns. Sorry, chum, we're just all different, have different ideas about what love is and what it implies, and most of us are adult enough to refuse to be lectured to without consent or invitation. You asked for it, though.
To the author - keep going. Don't take too much notice of wet blankets,but just write with a little more care and thoughtfulness. You'll do fine.
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Anonymous09/21/04
horrible
i liked it
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Anonymous10/01/05
Another 10 inch dicky
Now that all the male characters in Literotica are 8 1/2 to 10 inches I guess that in order to kep the guys happy the authors are going to have to go to 12-15.
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Anonymous03/09/06
hot story
good story don't listen those assholes they just jelious because maybe there dick is not good enough to these ones
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Anonymous02/16/14
HOT
So hot! I came twice. *melts*
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Anonymous07/31/15
:)
At first Trina was banging Steve while T.J. was at the store with Scott.
Then when they get to talking about who Trina's dating, she says she's with Scott.
English
Huh?
The whole thing starts because the husband, whom she loves so dearly, isn't giving her any, but when he tries she says, "Not tonight" and rolls away?
I just wish people would drop the inane, "Oh I love my spouse so much" BS when it is ALWAYS followed by actions that say the opposite.
Poor Old Anonymous in USA
The story has its faults, but your adverse criticism makes the sweeping statement that "I love you" carries a whole packet of well-defined meanings together with inevitable and inescapable follow-up behaviour patterns. Sorry, chum, we're just all different, have different ideas about what love is and what it implies, and most of us are adult enough to refuse to be lectured to without consent or invitation. You asked for it, though.
To the author - keep going. Don't take too much notice of wet blankets,but just write with a little more care and thoughtfulness. You'll do fine.
horrible
i liked it
Another 10 inch dicky
Now that all the male characters in Literotica are 8 1/2 to 10 inches I guess that in order to kep the guys happy the authors are going to have to go to 12-15.
hot story
good story don't listen those assholes they just jelious because maybe there dick is not good enough to these ones
HOT
So hot! I came twice. *melts*
:)
At first Trina was banging Steve while T.J. was at the store with Scott.
Then when they get to talking about who Trina's dating, she says she's with Scott.
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