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by rightbank12/22/16

that $500 knife he paid $10 for

is priced at $65 - $99 and wasn't worth his life.

He won't have to worry about his wife killing him when he gets home.

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by Anonymous12/22/16

The writing style is good. With its short sentences and simple words, plus violence - it almost reminds me of Hemingway!

The weakness of the story is that the reader knows what is going to happen from about the middle of the first paragraph.

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