so we can fuck shit up? C! The other options imply trust and i dont trust him! please hurry with the next chapter. …….my nails cant take the wait
by
Anonymous01/24/17
Yas yas yas!!
More! I need to know what happens. Things just got so real I love this story more than you can imagine. i ENVY Grace so wheres the option to jump into his arms??? But I’m with anon, it’s a little early to go poking around his life if it IS his wife or exwife or lover. Or sister who knows? C all the way
B or C!
Asking about that woman is gonna fuck everything up lmao but asking about his portraits could lead to him fucking her brains out!! Anything but A!
I don't usually like mystery with my smut, but I'm invested now.
Never stop writing. Ever.
On a separate note, I don't agree with any of the other commenters. I think I have a right to know about a man who has had his hand all up in my kittycat. Consequences and all, I choose A, but it's looking like no one else trusts him? Am I the only one who questions his past life?
Alternatively, I choose D - he makes good on that delicious threat of the belt. ;)
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Anonymous01/24/17
C
C
by
Anonymous01/24/17
Options
I am all for option C but will also accept option B but definitely not option A I agree it's way to early to be asking about the other woman.
Loving this story continue the good work.
by
Anonymous01/24/17
A
A. came for the smut, accidentally got caught in plot
I look forward 5o your other relleases! I am in love with everything about this story and your style. Obsession is hot on him. She should confront it. Like the other person said! Hot smut might come of it. B
Excellent read. Exceptional use of language, description, plot, and character development. Something we rarely see on this site, but could serve erotic stories well. If you've never thought about writing professionally, think about it.
As to the vote, I go option B with conditions. Maybe she starts by admitting she saw the large portrait he had been working on that day. If she then questions if he's ever used her as a subject before and he lies...well, that's a whole new set of problems. But, if he tells the truth... Either way, I don't like beating around the bush or drawing conclusions without all the facts. That just leads to more misunderstandings. And as her largest concern seems to be whether or not he might kill her, not whether or not the man might be cheating on some significant other, option B feels like the right choice.
No matter what the outcome, will definitely keep reading. Looking forward to your next chapter!
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Anonymous01/27/17
Love the progression!
Of course I choose B. But I also kinda want him to figure it out himself.
I definitely didn't expect that many votes. Three people voted A through email, four people voted B through email, and four people voted C through email. C won by one. 16/15. I'll begin writing it up tomorrow after I finish editing The Shatters. Voting is now closed.
That aside, thank you all for the kind comments. May you be blessed with . . . sigh, I got nothing. I'm so sleepy right now. Some Sort of Hero and The Shatters should be up sometime this week. Until then~
oh god
so we can fuck shit up? C! The other options imply trust and i dont trust him! please hurry with the next chapter. …….my nails cant take the wait
Yas yas yas!!
More! I need to know what happens. Things just got so real I love this story more than you can imagine. i ENVY Grace so wheres the option to jump into his arms??? But I’m with anon, it’s a little early to go poking around his life if it IS his wife or exwife or lover. Or sister who knows? C all the way
Hmmmmm.... B
B or C!
Asking about that woman is gonna fuck everything up lmao but asking about his portraits could lead to him fucking her brains out!! Anything but A!
c
I don't usually like mystery with my smut, but I'm invested now.
Never stop writing. Ever.
On a separate note, I don't agree with any of the other commenters. I think I have a right to know about a man who has had his hand all up in my kittycat. Consequences and all, I choose A, but it's looking like no one else trusts him? Am I the only one who questions his past life?
Alternatively, I choose D - he makes good on that delicious threat of the belt. ;)
C
C
Options
I am all for option C but will also accept option B but definitely not option A I agree it's way to early to be asking about the other woman.
Loving this story continue the good work.
A
A. came for the smut, accidentally got caught in plot
c
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great writting
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yassss
B or C!!!
This site was dead for me, but you brought it back to life.
Thanks for that.
Q&A
A: OPTION B PLEASE :)
I vote C
Love this story, I think it is getting better and better. But my vote is C, because Grace should dig around and find more clues about him first.
Awesome!
Loving the story. Keep it coming please. B
A
Trust him! Aaaaa.
B
I look forward 5o your other relleases! I am in love with everything about this story and your style. Obsession is hot on him. She should confront it. Like the other person said! Hot smut might come of it. B
Addicted!
These two are hot together and hot for each other.! With that being said, I'm voting for option C.
Love love love
Absolutely great read. I have to go back and read the first two chapters. Love to see her choose B . Keep up the great work.
Brillant!!!!!!!!!
I vote C.
B
C
C
Excellent
Excellent read. Exceptional use of language, description, plot, and character development. Something we rarely see on this site, but could serve erotic stories well. If you've never thought about writing professionally, think about it.
As to the vote, I go option B with conditions. Maybe she starts by admitting she saw the large portrait he had been working on that day. If she then questions if he's ever used her as a subject before and he lies...well, that's a whole new set of problems. But, if he tells the truth... Either way, I don't like beating around the bush or drawing conclusions without all the facts. That just leads to more misunderstandings. And as her largest concern seems to be whether or not he might kill her, not whether or not the man might be cheating on some significant other, option B feels like the right choice.
No matter what the outcome, will definitely keep reading. Looking forward to your next chapter!
Love the progression!
Of course I choose B. But I also kinda want him to figure it out himself.
Good job, ducklings.
I definitely didn't expect that many votes. Three people voted A through email, four people voted B through email, and four people voted C through email. C won by one. 16/15. I'll begin writing it up tomorrow after I finish editing The Shatters. Voting is now closed.
That aside, thank you all for the kind comments. May you be blessed with . . . sigh, I got nothing. I'm so sleepy right now. Some Sort of Hero and The Shatters should be up sometime this week. Until then~
B
B
please... B
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