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by Anonymous

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by Syndra Lynn06/13/04

Oh my God

Poignant, brutal honesty. Wonderful poetry. This is heart rending.

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by tarablackwood2206/13/04

Very...

...good stuff. Powerful, and honest, as Syn said. Your words grow by the day!

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by Tathagata06/13/04

Great stuff

Honest, brutal, real
Excellent job
Thank you

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by WickedEve06/13/04

wow

This poem will stick with me for awhile.

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by 06/14/04

A wide

open, strong and effectual piece--very raw.

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by DanaQt10/25/04

Love raw poetry!

Outstanding work! Love the free verse and the flow was superb!

A double WOW read!

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