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The Lost Martian Ch. 03

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by Anonymous12/27/16

One page

For almost a month and you only write 1 page , thats abit disappointing hey. Please could you make it longer especially if youre going to take a month

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by Anonymous12/28/16

Great story but I just started reading and it finished! Please make the chapters longer.

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