The Mixer

Great writing!

Paula's writing was excellent (particular the ending). Check her bio and note her picture. She looks good enough to eat; finely aged pussy is the best!

love it, so hot

I really wish that our family had been close enough to at least talk about everything.. even sweeter if we had been close enough to help with personal matters like that.. a pussy loving son..

It's an interesting concept, with a slight twist at the end of the tale. I enjoyed it, but it seemed a little rushed to be truthful.
Great profile pic by the way! xx

With You Being A Female Writer...

I'm a little surprised you haven't posted a taboo from the mom's POV yet. In my opinion, stories penned by women are always sexier from the woman's perspective.

DougNTexas

Great story, just about 5 times to short.

too short

should've been 2 pages at least.

more plz

catchy

Loved the twist at the end, nice work.

Nice Twist Ending But...

I thought the ending was clever and I did kind of enjoy it and got a chuckle out of it. But, man! I was really looking forward to them going to The Mixer! Oh well. Maybe a story for another time.

Nice twist at the end.

I liked the story, but it seemed a little too short. Stories are always too short for me though. I thought it interesting that you as a female writer wrote from the son's perspective. Good job! Loved the profile picture... you have me drooling.

Comments already on the site...

have said every thing I could. I love mother/son incest because it was my first sexual experience