Paula's writing was excellent (particular the ending). Check her bio and note her picture. She looks good enough to eat; finely aged pussy is the best!
I really wish that our family had been close enough to at least talk about everything.. even sweeter if we had been close enough to help with personal matters like that.. a pussy loving son..
It's an interesting concept, with a slight twist at the end of the tale. I enjoyed it, but it seemed a little rushed to be truthful.
Great profile pic by the way! xx
I'm a little surprised you haven't posted a taboo from the mom's POV yet. In my opinion, stories penned by women are always sexier from the woman's perspective.
I thought the ending was clever and I did kind of enjoy it and got a chuckle out of it. But, man! I was really looking forward to them going to The Mixer! Oh well. Maybe a story for another time.
I liked the story, but it seemed a little too short. Stories are always too short for me though. I thought it interesting that you as a female writer wrote from the son's perspective. Good job! Loved the profile picture... you have me drooling.
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have said every thing I could. I love mother/son incest because it was my first sexual experience
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Great writing!
Paula's writing was excellent (particular the ending). Check her bio and note her picture. She looks good enough to eat; finely aged pussy is the best!
love it, so hot
I really wish that our family had been close enough to at least talk about everything.. even sweeter if we had been close enough to help with personal matters like that.. a pussy loving son..
It's an interesting concept, with a slight twist at the end of the tale. I enjoyed it, but it seemed a little rushed to be truthful.
Great profile pic by the way! xx
With You Being A Female Writer...
I'm a little surprised you haven't posted a taboo from the mom's POV yet. In my opinion, stories penned by women are always sexier from the woman's perspective.
DougNTexas
Great story, just about 5 times to short.
too short
should've been 2 pages at least.
more plz
catchy
Loved the twist at the end, nice work.
Nice Twist Ending But...
I thought the ending was clever and I did kind of enjoy it and got a chuckle out of it. But, man! I was really looking forward to them going to The Mixer! Oh well. Maybe a story for another time.
Nice twist at the end.
I liked the story, but it seemed a little too short. Stories are always too short for me though. I thought it interesting that you as a female writer wrote from the son's perspective. Good job! Loved the profile picture... you have me drooling.
Comments already on the site...
have said every thing I could. I love mother/son incest because it was my first sexual experience
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