I really loved it, Softly. It was a most imaginative creation. It's obvious, of course, that you are extremely
sexually preoccupied, and probably as frequently so occupied.
What this story told me above all else, is your incredible
sensitivity.
You've written so many fine stories that it may be unfair to
categorize this one as "the best of your best." Each story has impressed me in its own right.
Many years ago, I while wrote some 300 plus erotic stories when I was in the navy serving aboard a destroyer. There were some 375 officers and enlisted men, most of whom encouraged me to "keep em coming." Even the captain read my stories and gave me permission to use the ship's office, computer, and printer, with the proviso that the got the first copy of each story. The stories ended up being passed from sailor to sailor all over the fleet.
I send a lot of emails to friends, relatives, and others
including other writers such as yourself. So that's the
writing I do, because I prefer to read than write. I don't
have time for both.
one of the most annoying common errors that drives me nuts is the use of loose for lose and lose for loose. To lose something is what happens, for example, when you misplace your keys and can't find them, they are lost. Something is loose when you don't tighten it enough or hold onto it with enough strength. If the lug nuts on your car tyre are loose, the wheel may fall off and you will lose the wheel and control of your car.
Near the end of this story is the sentence
"Yet by doing so, there was the greatest risk of loosing me."
By accident of grammatical error, a new usage of loose may have been created.
lol
English
It is a daring story
It did go well, Softly...
Thank You
John/Namizujs
Budapest
The best of your best
I really loved it, Softly. It was a most imaginative creation. It's obvious, of course, that you are extremely
sexually preoccupied, and probably as frequently so occupied.
What this story told me above all else, is your incredible
sensitivity.
You've written so many fine stories that it may be unfair to
categorize this one as "the best of your best." Each story has impressed me in its own right.
Many years ago, I while wrote some 300 plus erotic stories when I was in the navy serving aboard a destroyer. There were some 375 officers and enlisted men, most of whom encouraged me to "keep em coming." Even the captain read my stories and gave me permission to use the ship's office, computer, and printer, with the proviso that the got the first copy of each story. The stories ended up being passed from sailor to sailor all over the fleet.
I send a lot of emails to friends, relatives, and others
including other writers such as yourself. So that's the
writing I do, because I prefer to read than write. I don't
have time for both.
Moving right along ... Don the Texan
Great of Course!
You have a style about you. You make this fantasy very pleasant and even forgivable with the ending...
Where is she ?
How can I get to meet Alena... she, the woman of my dreams !
a curious accident
one of the most annoying common errors that drives me nuts is the use of loose for lose and lose for loose. To lose something is what happens, for example, when you misplace your keys and can't find them, they are lost. Something is loose when you don't tighten it enough or hold onto it with enough strength. If the lug nuts on your car tyre are loose, the wheel may fall off and you will lose the wheel and control of your car.
Near the end of this story is the sentence
"Yet by doing so, there was the greatest risk of loosing me."
By accident of grammatical error, a new usage of loose may have been created.
lol
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