to a possibly very erotic tale. I have no idea where the incest is yet but hope you keep going with this so we get to experience the whole relationship
I guess there's a thin line between being coy and being a pain in the ass.
Unfortunately, you went for the latter. The category indicates she is ... someone related to him, but that's the only indication. Without the category, without and indication of their relationship it's Erotic Coupling or something. It's not Incest/Taboo. The category is a lie and you're just fucking with us.
The "Great start" doesn't really make sense because there was no chapter number. If really this is the start, not giving any warning this wasn't a complete story is even more "fucking with us."
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Anonymous01/27/17
Who is Meghan?
Is Meghan a daughter, sister, cousin, or your favorite Household pet?
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Anonymous01/27/17
Imagination, the mind is the true erogenous zone
I like the story, it was gentle, it left much to the imagination, but it gives you a guided tour, but you get to decide what sites to see, what parts to enjoy, and what things turn you on. It is not a porn scene where there has to be a blow job, some reverse couwgirl, some leg overs, and a bit of missionary, but legs on her shoulders, before the payoff shot on her face and her lips..
This is a gentle story, that lets you enjoy the journey.
English
Great start
to a possibly very erotic tale. I have no idea where the incest is yet but hope you keep going with this so we get to experience the whole relationship
Huh?
Where's the incest? Where's the beef? lol
Who?
Well? Friend? Lover Mistress? Date? Roommate? Cousin? Sister-in-law? Wife? Daughter? Mother? Sister? Neighbor? Maid? Niece? Boss? Loaner? Rental? Sneaker? Captain? Captor? I give up! Fantasy.
I guess there's a thin line between being coy and being a pain in the ass.
Unfortunately, you went for the latter. The category indicates she is ... someone related to him, but that's the only indication. Without the category, without and indication of their relationship it's Erotic Coupling or something. It's not Incest/Taboo. The category is a lie and you're just fucking with us.
The "Great start" doesn't really make sense because there was no chapter number. If really this is the start, not giving any warning this wasn't a complete story is even more "fucking with us."
Who is Meghan?
Is Meghan a daughter, sister, cousin, or your favorite Household pet?
Imagination, the mind is the true erogenous zone
I like the story, it was gentle, it left much to the imagination, but it gives you a guided tour, but you get to decide what sites to see, what parts to enjoy, and what things turn you on. It is not a porn scene where there has to be a blow job, some reverse couwgirl, some leg overs, and a bit of missionary, but legs on her shoulders, before the payoff shot on her face and her lips..
This is a gentle story, that lets you enjoy the journey.
A well written story, however....
Who is she?
Missing the point
The readers who complain about not being told the identity of Megan are missing the very thing that makes this a very engrossing tale.
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