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A Penis and Pussy Villanelle

byWillOtheWisp©
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by Anonymous12/21/16

Use this as a template, "The penis and the pussy

set off in a pea green boat"....try for something lighter, your poem is too dense

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by AlinaX12/22/16

I do love a villanelle.

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by legerdemer12/25/16

Enjoyed it muchly!

I like the contrast between the playfulness, near-schoolgirl ditty, and the carnality - beautifully woven together in the villanelle form. It was recommended in the PF&D thread - thanks, AH, for pointing us here, to enjoy the penis and the pussy.

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