All Comments on 'Kaylissa's Conquest Ch. 01'

Meh, not really much there to get in to, should have been longer for a starting chapter. No score til we see if you bother to continue.

First commenter: OcelotTreats DID say that this was "Chapter One".

OcelotTreats: This IS Literotica -- your readers are looking for a thrill in each chapter. Maybe a bit more detail about Ella and her lover David would have sufficed, since that seems to be a minor subplot for this story at this point.

Poor start...or non start. Move along, nothing to see here!

Author needs to provide Something to keep us interested but falls flat on their ass, a waste of time imo.

i wish we had another FTDS