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Well Done
Great job on writing this fantastic chapter.
So good!
Thank you for the Christmas present!
Amazing chapter
this story line is so delicious. I loved the conversation from her point of view. She's a much more interesting character in those moments where we get insight into her world. I would hate hearing her perspective on some of the stuff that happens to Alex and Bella.
MOREEEEEEEEEE
MOREEEEEEEEEEEE
I love your stories and I love your writing. The scenes are super hot. With that being said, I don't find there's much in terms of plot progression. I thought this story was going to be an internal conflict with Trish considering we know how it ends. It seems like she's already submitting to him.
two thoughts
youre a great writer, but i had two thoughts:
1) there needs to be more tension somewhere, i get shes submitting because she feels like this guy is the only one who ever cared about her, but theres also a self-esteem issue, and she seems to have that problem in spades as well. maybe draw out how she starts having that while at the same time remaining attached to jordan.
2) more on his motives, pls.
yay!
Next chapter?
When's the next chapter?
Love all of your stories...
But I have to say that "Taken by the Wolf" and the current "Taken by the Viking" are two of my favorites!!! :-)
Keep up the great work... and please, please hurry along with chapter 8!!!
Thank you for sharing your talent with us your fans.
Sweetone66
P.S. I enjoy reading Trish's interactions with Bella and Alex as well as her perceptions regarding their treatment.
you're awesome
Just want to say that I am a huge fan of your work for the past...well years...whenever I'm in a mood and in need of some imagery from my mind, you're my go to.
Great Story
Am enjoying this story very much. Lovely tale, a great way of telling it and characters are so believable, thanks.
Love it
I love this story and am impatiently waiting for the next chapter.
Ch. 08
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