All Comments on 'The Debut'

Now thatsa some spicy meat ball. A great opener for Bi/Gay and room for more chapters-great plot line and plausable visuals.

It was good until I found out that Gene wasn't going to swallow any of the guys' loads. Eating cum is the best part of fellatio.

Great story line start.....more, more!

the comment is correct that eating cum is the best part oforal sex, whether your eating a man or woman. as a dedicated bi male, my body trembles as i feel the veins iun a cock swell and the body expand, knowing my mouth is about to be filled. regartdless of how clean smelling the cock isd, sometimes the taste of the cum just isnt good. but, most of the time i love the feeling as the cock pulses again and again andmy swallowing gets right in time. when all the cumis out, i like to hold it in my mouth fot a while. i think i must be feeling the way a woman does when she has been well fucked and full of cum and just stays there for a miment feeling fulfilled.

I think that this story was very good. The only thing that i didn't like about it was that gene wasn't going to eat the cum.. I think that the cocksucking would have been better if he would have.

A different slant on a guy's first oral experience. I liked it!!!

Short sweet and to the point. Loved it.

Hello

I enjoy you writing style. It ia sensual and addresses all topics confortably.

Thanks fellow Rockies. Dweller

Regards. Ed

I do agree with other commenters though, should have swallowed those loads. Went so far as to blow three dudes, kind of a waste not eating those hot loads. That's just me though, I've only sucked and swallowed in a one on one situation.

Very hot story