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by Anonymous

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by YDD06/13/04

yawning til the end

Generally average in content
but the final lines are new
and quite pleasing.

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by Toward A Word06/14/04

roiling just out of sight

I'm not sure we're meant to understand it all - but it conjures up disturbing images. Well done - though concern remains...

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