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Just knew that was coming
What a stupid story. Um, loving WIVES?
A treat
What a treat! I do hope you'll write more.
Good
I like the writing and I hope you continue it. Don't let these closet cucks bring you down with their post-masturbatory shame.
post_masturbatory_shamelord
did your mother have any kids that lived? just wanted to know, I mean after all your a brain dead moron. Lit doesn't have less than one, but they should, they should!
Hot
Love this little story. Just the kind of conversation I would have with my wife or girlfriend and the reaction would be the same.
Not for me
Not a fan of cuck tales; however since this is your first attempt here on LW, just a small tip to help improve your writing. Just STICK to one person in each paragraph i.e
first or third are the usual but don't mix them up. 1 *
Not a bad start, but...
Not a bad start, but it has some issues that shoudn't be forgotten: Even living together they are just boyfriend/girlfriend, no strings attached...They had already various separations, and the questions are: 1st - When she needed to fuck other guys, did she used an argument to have a short separation? If so her love for him has many flaws...2nd - now that she found out he is a cuckold, how her love and respect for him will suffer? If that love and respect wasn't very strong, now will be even less...And being so this relationshil will never get to engagement much less to marriage...2* for now
CUCKOLDS
Most readers here are cucks or have been cucked thats why we come here every day hoping to read another cuck story.Why all the hate after reading the cuck stories is beyond me.If you are reading this section you are a cuckold.
living in the past in both of their minds
he wants to learn more and she living in her past... wow if that is not in your grey matter.
Much Ado About a Hooters Waitress
She hears every line in the book when unattached and is exercising her right as a single girl to play the field. But he shouldn't take eye off the ball, just concentrate on obtaining engineering degree from Berkeley. If she won't give him family discount on next order of bacon wrapped chicken wings with Bleu cheese on side, somebody else will.
Very intriguing
Lovely story. Please ignore hate mail and continue to write. The psychological unfolding in the story is hot!!!
Also today a new baboon
1*
Perspective
Your story is an interesting start, but you really need to work on perspective. It's very confusing when it suddenly switches from first person, which most of it is in, to third.
Example:
3rd person-
He kissed her longingly as she climbed off of him, making her way to his side where her left hand drifted towards his member.
1st person & 3rd?-
I put my on her face, and gently brought it back up so that they made eye contact. "Have you made out with other guys?"
"I" in this sentence is 1st but "they" is third... it should have been "we made eye contact."
Thank you for writing.
Best~
More please
I thought it was a great story. Explore the mind games some more before anything actually happens. Can't wait for chapter 2!
Good start
Believable dialog and good tension. Ignore the comments and forge ahead with what you want to say.
My wife and I have done this for 40 years...
We were on again, off again through school, marrying not long after she graduated. That's when I found out she wasn't a virgin, but I still was. She was very, VERY experienced and we've used it for our naughty bedroom sex every since.
It turns out the guy who took her cherry was my best friend. I knew they were going out, just not that he was going IN!. That fueled a lot of nasty sex, I knew that fucker was hung, his nickname since 6th grade was mule. She said when he popped her cherry, it was like a baseball bat had been stuck in there. It didn't last long, she said, about 10 strokes. Then a month of healing and then a second time which took more healing. After that, he fucked her almost everyday, multiple times each day during the summer months.
He wasn't the only one, each time her and I got together and then split up, she fucked a different guy out of spite. I was the only one she didn't let between her legs, because as she said, I was the only one that was husband material and didn't want to seem like a slut.
Now after all these years, I've learned of at least 4 different guy that tasted her charms, dipped their wicks, in my future wife's juices!
Dear Anon
Before you start telling writers that they're posting incorrectly perhaps you should check it yourself.
Mods in the forum have said girlfriends, fiances and wives are all good in LW.
Your bad
Author: 3*
Baby baby baby baby baby baby baby baby baby
wonder if you could have got the words baby or babe in this story more?
My wife and I have done this for 40 year
You are the most pathetic poster that In have ever read on this site. Your married to a slut , and proud of it. She fucked every one of your so called friends, and you get nothing. She said she didn't fuck you because you were the only one that was marriage material, no she didn't fuck you because she knew your a fucking stupid idiot. She fucks your friends you stay at home and jack off, pathetic. You probably ware panties not boxers, whose kids did you raise, if you had any, yours or your friends, the on with the big cock. I'M surprised you had the nerve to post that peace of info about your disgusting existence and marriage
Excellent
Im lucky I didnt come in my pants reading the last sentence..Nice job!
Nice story
Not sure why these types of stories always bring out the trolls who are clearly incapable of accepting other people's passions/fetishes, but I liked it! Keep up the writing!
Loved!
Amazing story - I love how natural and realistic their discovery is. keep going!
Well written and realistic
I can see where this could be a dangerous subject for a young couple. I suspect the boyfriend is going to end up a cuck wimp, but it is worth reading more.
1*
cuck shit.
Whoa!
There is definitely just one anony-hater fuck! You must be a typical lib in that you don't want anyone to have a chance to read something YOU don't care for. If you don't like it, no one else should.
Like a television, learn to make a choice for yourself and turn the channel and not worry about what others enjoy.
What a dick-loser!
FUCKED UP CUCK SHIT
JUST ANOTHER DEAD END SHIT TALE. UNREALISTIC, BULLSHIT.
Thanks
Thanks everyone, I appreciate it. Even the haters.
Good Job
Good start to this story and I find it interesting. The only problem was you were switching between first and third person several times in this story which was confusing.
MINUS 5* FOR CUCK SHIT!
Online idiotic cuck crap!
wow
Off the hook hot and Out-motherfucking-standing. Well done
an excellent example of why
Tags should appear at the beginning of each story.
Or why I wish the writer would have the courtesy to give us a heads up regarding a basic theme.
Sorry but this genre is not erotic for me, quite the opposite.
1*
fag cuck shit.
closet cucks
You all know exactly what sort of stories are posted in this category. yet here you are. jerking off.
to last commenter
referring about yourself ass wipe 1*
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