All Comments on 'Coffee Break Fuck Poem'

all ya had to do was ask, Liar. I can always get a new job! This is hot.

I know just what you mean...

So glad you submitted this, Liar. Loved it on the thread. Lovin it still.

If you are going to write a sharp and blunt erotic poem

it might as well be like this one!

It rushes along and drags the reader with it.

Well written

...like I said on the passion thread, this is 'beyond yummy'!! I'll have to see what to knock off my favorites list for this! As glorious as it is, it could probably do with a better title!

you'd be more than an urban legend. ;)

As I had written to you previously, there would be a "Do Not Disturb" sign on the Xerox Room should you be working with me! *wink

Great poetry, Liar...I understand where you are coming come with this one...there is someone in my office who is the "object of my affection" and this truly hit home!

I have shunned office jobs all my life, I tell ya dont get sex like that in my garden, unfortunately, but Im up for making some changes... :) this rocks Liar, hehe, way to go

must make copies, must make copies. Sorry, suddenly feel a need to reproduce. Great stuff!

I don't usually comment on things but this was really a terrific piece. Awesome job.

love this =)