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I Want A Child

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by tarablackwood2206/13/04

Gorgeous!

Lines that flow like mountain water, clear and clean and full of life.
Just marvelous poetry!

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by YDD06/13/04

I Want A Child

A well written reason for growing up
and very good description of a young child and the effect on life.
I would wish you had left out the first dad reference and saved it till the end.

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