I'd start with one star. Many, many errors. However, I am assuming English is not your mother tongue, so I will allow a bit. So two stars. The story was mediocre, half of a star. I'll round up to three.
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I'd start with one star. Many, many errors. However, I am assuming English is not your mother tongue, so I will allow a bit. So two stars. The story was mediocre, half of a star. I'll round up to three.
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