Shelly's First Time with Dr. Wilson

Hmmmmm was a fun read... but there are a few issues that rose my eyebrow.

- She orgasmed? Really? Feels like a trope. The young teen learning from an older man, becomes totally in love with him from cumming so hard. That just doesn't happen though, literally 100% of the female friends I have didn't orgasm when losing their virginity. If you go hunting, then you are bound to find one women who enjoyed it, but then again some women have 2 vagina's. Just because it can happen doesn't mean it is common.

- Why would he do this condom trick? WHY? It seems so silly. If he is teaching her about sex, just have him tell her how it will feel so much better... He then takes off the condom and fucks her bareback. This whole deception thing didn't make any sense. Why not just poke a hole in the condom if he wanted to knock her up? Also, why would he want to knock her up? Doesn't really make sense.

Saying that I enjoyed the story. I always nitpick...

That makes no sense

He dilated her cervix? A cervix is the opening to the uterus. He would not have been dilating it, and if he did it would be very painful.

Uhh...

It was so far fetched that it wasn't believable. Plus there was zero reluctance/nonconsent, so I don't understand why it's under this section. Other then that, it was decently written.

Fantasy

I thought it was fun to read. I also kept in mind it was a fantasy so even though it didn't seem possible it was after all just a fantasy and was fun to read.

GET male nickname

I really hate when male writers use female nicknames here...

As for the story? Rubbish.

Mmmnmm

I did something similar in the past. I cut the end of a condom off and put it back in the opened wrapper. In the dark I pretended to be opening a fresh condom instead of this prepared one. When I started cumming the cum went straight up inside the unprotected pussy. I had some amazingly hard cums that way...!

That reminds me of my first examination

I have often thought about a situation that happened to me on my first examination. We all queued up and went in individually to see a female medical professional. As part of the examination I was told to lay back and open my legs. I saw a plastic syringe with a short thin plastic tubing attached all filled with a cloudy liquid. The medical professional parted my pussy lips and inserted the tubing into my virginal pussy; I closed my eyes and I could feel the results of her emptying half of the syringe into me. Looking back I can now only think this was her boyfriends cum juice, what else could it be? At the time I just did what I was told and guessed that every girl in the queue had the same procedure applied to her, certainly the girl who followed me in to the room as I left had a half full syringe waiting for her; so you can imagine I did not question anything at the time and it would be too late to do anything about it now but your story reminded me of the afternoon following that first examination when I went into the toilet and lowered my panties when I went for a pee and I saw the sticky fluid that had leaked out of me into the gusset of the panties, little did I realise the rest of the fluid was swimming up inside me but I do think about this and wonder what actually happened on that day...!

Uncomfortable

Maybe I'm not using the site right, but I wish there was a way to sort by tags, not just categories. Maybe it's a thing for some people and I'm not here to judge (reminding myself that this is the reluctance section) but it makes me uncomfortable to read of men deceiving women and cuming inside them, fantasizing about getting them pregnant. To me that's just too much.

Wrong category

I feel like this isnt really consent sex, bc the girl is so unexperienced ( she doesnt know whats going on) and he is secretly impregnating her. Not my stuff at all. Dont wanna judge but i think it isnt placed in the right category.