It has been a long time since I tried publishing anything, so I decided to list this short story as a way of testing the waters. I'm sorry if it wasn't to anyone's liking.
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Anonymous12/29/16
Good start
Perhaps placing it in Non-Human & expanding the story a bit more would help. I liked it & would like to read more.
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Anonymous12/29/16
Chapter One?
Perhaps you could expand on the concept. Give some background for the characters. This could be a flashback for a couple, or a memory of the one that got away.
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first attempt
It has been a long time since I tried publishing anything, so I decided to list this short story as a way of testing the waters. I'm sorry if it wasn't to anyone's liking.
Good start
Perhaps placing it in Non-Human & expanding the story a bit more would help. I liked it & would like to read more.
Chapter One?
Perhaps you could expand on the concept. Give some background for the characters. This could be a flashback for a couple, or a memory of the one that got away.
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