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Bravo!!
One of the better turns in the series. Looking forward to the next turn with Carol. Love it when the submissive MILF turns seductress. Will Carol also be a pet for the week-end with the 18 yr. old submissives when she loses the contest?
very good
why can't all your stories be this good, I really liked the fact that both woman got what they wanted
More of the same
You really could take any of this author's stories, change the names, and you would never know the difference. And somehow everyone thinks this author is great. Where are manboy, who wants to be her sub, that dc or cd guy, who defended her against the critique guy, and critique guy himself, who says silk is really great writer, I just want her to finish stories. Give me a break. What he should want is silk to start a story. One that doesn't start like all the rest. Or continue like all the rest. Or end like all the rest. The same old story. Lather. Rinse. Repeat.
I liked the banter between
Portia and Simone. It was a really good back and forth between them. I loved the story!
A very yummy story!
Very yummy indeed! Well done!
As Always A Great Read
As with all your stories this one is great. For my mind you are the best story teller on site
@ "More of the Same"
Dear "anonymous", have you ever read erotic writing before? There are only so many story possibilities. In the case of this author, she has now written over 300 stories and therefor there is going to be a certain amount of similarity between various of her stories. Have you ever read any other genres of fiction? If you have read many novels before you would have found that there is very much a formula to writing in the various genres including the actual length of the book.
To Jasmine,
As a guy that loves women in stockings, I like that this story happened in a Victoria's Secret store. The story was a bit more tender than your usual mistress/sub. stories. It would be nice if more of your mistress/sub. stories were more like this. I'm not really into some of the degradation of the sub. in some of your other stories.
Keep up the great work, this was a really good story.
Just because there are only 42 plots available for any author to chose from is no reason for formulas to be followed to the extent that all stories are predictable. There is no reason why jealous lovers can't bring in farm animals to shake the whole thing up and destroy any semblance of the predatory dyke seducing confused girls let alone a good ole fashioned lesbian gang bang...
OMG
As a lesbian who has had a long time crush on Mila 211 Kunis I can't believe what I just read. I love the movie scene with her and Natalie Portman I really hope there is a part 2 and the real Mila joins the action. Maybe have her meet Simone. Great stuff
This series continues to be terrific
Loved the latest installment!
My only very minor critique regarding your stories is the dialogue you often have happening while oral sex is occurring. I would think that, at most, only a few words would be exchanged during this time. I know when I go down on my wife, the only sounds coming from our mouths are pleasurable moans (and screams from her - if I do a really good job). Trying to have an actual conversation kills the mood.
great
Another really great story , this series is a terrific read and can't wait for more.
Keep up your great work.
What turns into an orgy
It would be interesting to see if the shy Carol could help 'turn' a whole room of straights and get credit for them all-say at a slumber party, pool party, or all women's social committee meeting! What about it??
Next installment
Any idea when the next exciting chapter will be posted?
Next
When's the next story coming out?
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