I liked this story & gave it a 4 [(☆☆☆☆) 4.2/5.0 = 84%]
Short, sweet, erotic. One can jack off to it.
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Anonymous01/26/17
Good story line
It's pretty clear that English is not your first language. Working with a translator and editor will make your writings easier to read. I'm sure your work is sexy and erotic in your first language. Keep up the good effort.
I liked this story & gave it a 4 [(☆☆☆☆) 4.2/5.0 = 84%]
Short, sweet, erotic. One can jack off to it.
Good story line
It's pretty clear that English is not your first language. Working with a translator and editor will make your writings easier to read. I'm sure your work is sexy and erotic in your first language. Keep up the good effort.
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