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Stormy Camping Trip Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by handyman20012/28/16

Very nice

Very Nice.
I bet Earnest was surprised to find you fucking in him.

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by Anonymous12/28/16

Good story!

Please continue!

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by Frank8112/28/16

great follow up

very good story both the first and this follow up, i hope there will be more soon

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by Anonymous12/28/16

More please

Loved both chapters and can't wait to read more.

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by Anonymous12/28/16

Is Kelly a soldier in the army of Atilla?

Folks, this is a pet peeve of mine and I'm sorry if I'm being too picky, but "hun" is a member of a confederation of warrior bands that were, at one point, led by Atilla. "Hunny," therefore, is presumably an adjective to describe one who has traits of a Hun. "Honey" on the other hand, while being a food produced by bees, is also a term of endearment. Similar such terms include include "Sweetie," "Sugar", "Dear", and in some parts of the United States, "honey-child." "Hunny" means war-like, "Honey" means having a sweet nature or disposition." This isn't a matter of spelling. The wrong word changes the entire sentiment of the quoted passage. Please folks, don't overthink this.

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by Anonymous12/28/16

luv it

please write more ;)

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by Anonymous12/28/16

Beautiul

When I read this my hands went to my breasts and I thought about how cunning she was and I had always dreamed that I could go on a camping trip with my Daddy.
I started massaging and squeezing my clit and came wetting my panties.

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by CassieK12/29/16

Keep her cumming "Daddy"

I love this girl, she's such a "nympho", I am sure "literotica writer" will have to introduce more participants into this story. Perhaps James the Park Ranger, or maybe Kelly fancies a bit of "pussy" herself to share with Daddy?

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by scotlyt12/29/16

Great story

I can't wait to hear the rest

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by hyperlizard12/30/16

Great story well written please continue the story

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by Anonymous12/30/16

Love the story. Really hoping you don't add more characters to it.

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by doogdoog112/31/16

Great story

Please continue! It would be great if mom is able to join them at some point, but take the story where you want to. If it is anything like the first 2 parts I will be reading it! Thanks!

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by Anonymous01/23/17

Eh, eh, eh...

All week, huh? And the writer and story get this incoherent after one night and one page? Momma's gonna know before he even pulls up into their driveway. It'll be the telltale drip of cum from under the car door. The door on Kelly's side. There isn't any way he can disguise the signs of a week-long fuck fest. His crossed eyes, bowed legs, shuffling stagger, and sack below his knees are going to give him away. What a stupid fuck!

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by Anonymous02/15/17

Gawd, anon is such a whiny bitch! Who pissed in his Chereos this morning?
The story was pretty short, but fun! The chapters are short enough that several more could be added without it getting boring.
Thanks!

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