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by bjmikan12/30/16

Very hot

Loved the progression of the journey.

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by Anonymous12/30/16

Where have you been ?

Glad to see you back and enjoy your stories !

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by Anonymous12/30/16

WONDERFUL STORY

One of the best stories here in a long time.My wife and I started this same way and I love being her voyer as she is a show off and never wears panties in public.I now share my wife with a best friend and its just so hot watching her have sex with another man.Thanks for a great story.

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by Anonymous12/30/16

Watching the wife change?

Mine was 4'8", 165 pounds after 2 kids. Trust me, that is BIG! No amount of encouragement had any effect. Our sex life dropped to just about zero.
Then yep, Type 2 diagnosis. She started dieting, exercise, after a year and change of 3 times a week at the area gym she was down to 110, then a few months later she was 93, same as she weighed when I met her at 17.
Talk about changes! All new clothes, new manner, new confidence, and yep, she got flirty and did some peekaboo stuff. Just like she did when we first met, I guess I should have known.
Then she was getting hit on instead of mostly ignored by guys we knew. A couple got aggressive, like right in front of me, which got me into a few fights since she wasn't doing much brushing them off.
Then of course the next step, cheating, lying about it. The first time I caught her cold we tried to work it out, the 2nd time I realized there was no point.
Radical body improvements can be fine, but some females go overboard. I ended up paying child support for about a dozen years. My current wife is chubby, a sweetheart and it's just fine.

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by Anonymous12/31/16

However...

Thematically, your story is reasonably good; however, you would really benefit having someone edit your submissions. There are numerous errors you're making that will deter many from reading more than a few paragraphs.

Lastly, please never use 'I seen' again. :)

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by Anonymous12/31/16

Nice premise, but...

Nice story idea, but it just read a bit rough and choppy. Some additional editting would help.

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by Anonymous01/01/17

😡

No one wears underwear under bike shorts, it causes bad chafing in the long run.

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by Anonymous02/15/17

Basicly did the same

Got my girlfriend to get more daring, then flirting with guys, and in the end we had quite a few MFM sexcapaides. I loved the way she got into it all over aperiod of time and was hot sharing her,

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