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The BEST STORY I HAVE READ!!!!!!
WOW I just couldn't put it down. Fantastic job!!!
Got to page 2 this time
Still garbage.
Bad story
Check your timeline a few months pass and the kid is 4 years older.
A pretty good story considering the author
One obervation regarding Rebekkah : He could have very easely resolved the problem,a dna sample to the court and he would have visitation rights ,maybe even joint custody (not sure),she would allso have a namechange to Paulson ,ok ,i know it's a MM story,for the first time ever since i read a MM story i actually give it 4 ****
Movie material
This is the first story I've ever commented, and it's because this certanly is an Oscard-winning movie ready to be made.
Could not stop reading.
Authentic Misery
My goodness. What misery you inflicted on your poor hero. And just as I thought you were about to have him pick up and start moving forward you took his legs away. And as if that wasn't enough you then burnt his wife to a crisp.You made us wonder whatever was coming next. All with the pain of the original deceit rumbling along in the background giving him not an iota of mercy. But you did it all with style and authentic feeling. It was a real gut wrencher. There were times when I wasn't sure I could stand any more but it was worth it. Great story I shall now read some more of your submissions. Keep it up. Regards.
Jack
All characters ethical, moral and emotional dwarfs
How do you expect forgiveness when you don't think you did anything wrong? Screwing your husbands best friend shortly after your honeymoon? No regrets after three years of deceit? A Wimpy guy who crawls into a bottle and can't move on because he's an emotional midget. Best friend and wife who get off on making fun of his physical shortcomings(penis size). Please explain where the friendship and caring come in? Why do they want to help him? They obviously don't respect him, don't actually like him very much, and think he's a loser, so again explain the connection that draws them to care about him, I don't see it. The only reason I see is guilt. She claimed she loved him when caught screwing best friend but wants to stay married as long as he goes along with her twice a month screwing with his friend when he says no to being a knowing cuckold she divorces him. None of your characters are likable or have decent redeemable qualities. Not once does the writer treat the fact that his best friend stabbed him in the back, his wife never even thought that the child was her husband's even though she got pregnant when they were still sleeping together and never checked who the father was even when she was obviously whoring around and had two dicks in her at about the same time as conception. The attitude of the wife and best friend about their disgusting behavior is so nonchalant as if this is the way all people act and they have nothing to be ashamed of. The loser drunk can't get his act together to man up and demand his rights as a father and no one seems to ever tell the daughter that her mother was a whore that was screwing step dad for three years before she was conceived and that Mom and Step Dad wanted to keep fucking over dear old Dad. Too many stupid illogical and nonsensical parts to the story. The rich guy is worth millions and then over a billion yet they harp on thousands of dollars and how selfless they are. Give me and the rest of us a break. A five thousand dollars wedding really?
Matt needs to be put down
He's one rabid fuck
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