All Comments on 'Two Good Neighbors Ch. 06'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
make a part7

u really need to make a part 7 were kyle is slowly become his woman n make perma moves 2 live with him n become awife n maybe a sex change

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
I love this story

I can't wait for chapter 7. Kyle is adorable, and the fact that he's beginning to care for Mark on his own without being told to is great. I just don't make him have a sex change. I think he's so adorable as a trap that he doesn't need to change.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 7 years ago
No Sex Change

I don't find Sex Change attractive or sexually appealing. The fact that he is a boy in girls clothes is much more appealing and sexually exciting. Wonderful story, great writing and looking forward to a few more chapters! Good job and thank you!

WMLA44WMLA44about 7 years ago
Another thought

One other exciting twist would be that Kyle had never been hypnotized at all but instead went along and enjoyed every moment and has now fallen in love and the two move in together. That would be quite the twist on the story!

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