Settling In Ch. 01

This is really good! Looking forward to the next chapter.

A Great Start

Very well written. This could be the start of a beautiful friendship and a long and nicely erotic series. So let's have the next chapter soon.

Nice

I'm looking forward to the continued story

Longer chapters

Love where this is going. Just makes me want longer chapters. Please keep this going.

Thank you all for the nice comments.

I've actually already written and submitted Chapter 2 :) Just waiting on it to be approved. I'm excited some of you are enjoying it. Reading it back published, I've already noticed some awkward sentences and minor mistakes that I've made sure to try to avoid in future chapters. I'm almost finished with the third, and will be submitting that as soon as I finish it.

Have a great New Years Eve everyone!

Please continue!

I'm weighing in for extra chapters soon! If Greyson has texted pictures of himself shirtless, with "soft hairs" covering his chest and abs, Noah is in for a delightful sight. It sounds as if Noah hopes Grey is gay, and Gray just might be! Let their naked togetherness start, and the sex and possibly love can follow. Sounds like each guy deserves some happiness, and Grey seem to like to include Noah in events. I hope this bodes well for their first year together! University roommates can be very loving!

I am reminded of studying at the university, and meeting with a student a year older than myself to go over something he had missed in a lecture class. We had grown friendly enough in class to talk with each other every day, because we sat near each other and frequently exchanged notes and ideas for the class. He knew I took good notes, and so invited me to his dorm room to review notes. He lived alone that semester. He played tennis, and had dark hair and a good athletic build. He wore polo shirts that always showed a delicious bit of chest hair exposed at the open collar. In his dorm room, he sat around shirtless, and I drooled at his sexy chest, nicely haired across the pecks with a treasure trail to die for that divided his abs perfectly. One thing led to another, and we ended up naked on his bed, with the door locked, enjoying one another. Thankfully he didn't believe in trimming or shaving his chest hair or pubes. He was simply put, a gorgeous man! He had a cock of about 7 to 8 inches and knew how to use it. He leaked pre-cum like you wouldn't believe, and shit loads of cum seeming on demand! We had fun for a whole year off and on before he graduated. I missed him after that, but though often of our loving encounters.

I can't wait for chapter 2 I'm so excited

Solid start

I agree with others on longer chapters because I am already looking forward to next installment

So far so good! Looking forward to the next chapter.

GREAT FIRST START

You are a natural. Looking forward to future submittals.

Hooked already! Your story has an easy flow. Can't wait till the next part

AMAZING

Please write more

Nice start!

Looking forward to more. :)

Great start

You are a great story teller. Now tell us more!

Nice

Please do continue.. Good start

This was so refreshing to read. Your use of short paragraphs and a combination of narration/dialogue was perfect. I loved how you used a detail "open window letting in the warm Seattle air" to give us information as opposed to spoon feeding it to us. awesome, awesome, awesome.

HELLO JAMES good start ,nice read now start putting the stories up fast nice to have a writer who can spell lol jonathan x england