Truth or Dare

Thank you...

I very much enjoyed your story.

Great job!

I loved tour story!
It is well told and vivid!
Please keep up the great work!

Good story..

...But lots of editing required to make it great.

There really wasn't much to it. Nice try though.

Good hot story

My sister and I had sex together all through college and still do when we get the chance.Thanks for sharing

excellent

Good work. Thnx for the hardon.

lost in the mail?

how do i get an invitation to a party like that??!! great story.

Boxet prolitt dunscavio.

5***** Nice work. BTW I have no idea what that title means. I made it up.
Boonis Glottious €¥£~

Aside from the whole "committing incest in front of a room full of people who know both siblings", it seemed only slightly far-fetched.

I know this is Literotica, and we're supposed to "suspend disbelief", but this was asking a bit much of your readers. If nobody had known them, or at least nobody knew they were siblings, I might have been able to pretend it was at least possible. But in real life, there's this thing about "putting the djinni back in the bottle". You do something, and it's only a minute or a few minutes of your life, but it stays with you. Permanently.

It's been almost thirty years since I attended university, but when my old friends and I refer to people we knew back then, there are people who we still refer to as "Larry-who-fucked-his-cousin" and "Ron-who-blew-the-DJ". If there was even a GERM of truth to this story, the protagonist would be "Ash-who-fucked-her-brother" for the rest of her life.

Part II?

When they get home, and a day or two has passed, let them try this again at home in the comfort of their own room. Then, they can do the proper exploration, blow job, etc., and she can actually taste and touch him everywhere and they can give each other an extended mutual pleasure!

100% Agree with

Epiphany_Jones Comment

Just makes no sense that they'd have sex in front of others so casually
Could of made it a bro/sis truth or dare

Great

Great story keep it up.

More

I hope you expore ToD more.

Good story!

I liked the story and found it exciting. It was also my first story to be read on Literotica this year! A good way to start the year.

Incest stories

Usually the only incest stories I read are D/D. But I liked this one. Never mind the negative comments. This is after all, a place to post FICTION. Looking forward to reading more of your stories. (I gave it 5 stars)

BRILLIANT FIRST STORY!!

Brilliant story, especially for a first timer. Keep up the good work xx

Great story

Very hot story, well written, please write more.

"Could of made it a bro/sis truth or dare"

Perhaps you were off school the day they taught English grammar? It's could HAVE!
The story was OK, nothing special and nothing that hasn't been done before. With so many stories here now it's difficult to find something original.

Great job! Look forward to reading more from you.

I've been reading stories on this site for a long time and I'm currently writing one of my own. Don't listen to the jerks with their rude comments. This story is great, especially for being your first one. Maybe a little more building up next time?

Keep up the good work cant wait to see what you have coming next. Also ignore all the negative comments you did great for your very first one

Pretty Good Story

A couple of grammar errors. IMO, it should have been doggystyle as there's less of an intimate connection, and if she went into the night with a crush on him, yet still hesitant, her reaction would be more natural.

Very well done!

Hope to see more stories from you. Loved this one!

Part 2 Please

Ignore the hate! I loved it and hope to see a part two to the siblings story!

read the story 3 times and got hard each time

GOOD STORY..Love to read about her fucking her brother again