At the height of the Black Death, a mysterious encounter ...
I think it can be an interesting beginning of a romantic, albeit dramatic story.
Waiting for the next chapter.
5 * for you.
I apologize for my English (yet), is not my native language.
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Anonymous01/03/17
good start
This is an excellent start. The use of descriptive language gives me hope that the finished story will become a publication quality story that I can have my boyfriend read to me as a form of foreplay.
English
An interesting beginning of a story.
At the height of the Black Death, a mysterious encounter ...
I think it can be an interesting beginning of a romantic, albeit dramatic story.
Waiting for the next chapter.
5 * for you.
I apologize for my English (yet), is not my native language.
good start
This is an excellent start. The use of descriptive language gives me hope that the finished story will become a publication quality story that I can have my boyfriend read to me as a form of foreplay.
An excellent beginning.
Hope to see more soon.
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