Mom and I Ch. 01

A yummy start, but...

Fast and furious is okay, this started hot... But then you lost me when he started calling her his slut and whore... The first time, in the first chapter; was that your intent? Since its chapter 01, it could have been saved for later...

Thank you!

Fuck them

The three smucks who commented before me. This is another of your very good stories. When I see your name it's a must read. Never disappointed.

Re: Fuck them

Asr3, are you really that shallow? Those comments weren't bad. That's what this section is for.... criticism, good or bad.

Are you one of those people on here that can't handle any kind of criticism? It's strange, because you didn't write this story and you got offended like a snowflake about something not even directed towards you.

Great Story, Interesting point of view/

I really enjoyed this. I'm writing a father-daughter story, and this one gave me some inspiration as to how you presented the details and lead in to the sex act.

Spelling???

God get a life,,,This is a great story and morons like you come here and read every word then cry about a mispelled word..Write a story for us if you can do better??

Loving

Very loving and caring, just wonderful. Looking to read. How mom will dress and act on thire first date

That's a long tongue...

If he was able to lick her g-spot, dude has to be Gene Simmons.

A good story!

Alex sounds like one sexy young man. Give him some chest hair, just enough across the secs and in the sternum that mom can stroke and taste. Sometimes a man's chest is very sensitive like a woman's and tasting and stroking the chest hair can be a very exciting moment for the young man. Alex seems that he might enjoy his mother's attention to the pecs and chest and abs and thighs and forearms and ...

Yes, so HOT and descriptive ....so many possibilities like his Mom is
wearing just a sexy lace panty and a t-shirt top just barely holding her big boobs. Alex comes home and screws her right there and pulls out to come all over her butt, back and into her hair. That's to show Mom how much cum he has for her and that playful sex encounters is part of the plan too. Yes another chapter, please. Thank you.

excellent writing

Really good erotica. One caveat: "in the throws of passion"- the word is "throes"
Please keep writing!

Fuck yes

excellent writing, I am able to read through the slight errors without any trouble at all. Are you planning on continuing this relationship? Like how will they be together while he goes to college? Maybe she will move with him, if she wants him that often she will need to be near him all the time. I do hope they end up as a loving couple.

Just nice

Great story, finished reading it and just had to send a nice load out thinking about your story ! loved it.

Son

Like my whore mother

Very good

Yes, very good story although I wish it had mom swallowing more incestuous cum...that's just my own preferences , I suppose. Keep writing! Just learn a little female anatomy. A woman's g spot isn't reachable by a tongue. A finger or two, yes.....but not a tongue

Thanks***

For the read.