I have been interested in telekinesis or psychokinesis,myself, for some time now.
Very well written story and very sexy too. I have been thinking of writing one about this subject, only mine would be in the mind control section.
Hope I can bring as good a story as you have.
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Anonymous01/02/17
Not bad
This is a good story. A bit slow, but not too awful.
Sorry, but this story didn't really do it for me. I am normally a SCI -FI and fantasy guy, open minded to new ideas. I just couldn't make the leap.
It seemed well written, just not for me. Keep writing, maybe the next one will grab me by the balls.
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I have been interested in telekinesis or psychokinesis,myself, for some time now.
Very well written story and very sexy too. I have been thinking of writing one about this subject, only mine would be in the mind control section.
Hope I can bring as good a story as you have.
Not bad
This is a good story. A bit slow, but not too awful.
Not bad, but...
Sorry, but this story didn't really do it for me. I am normally a SCI -FI and fantasy guy, open minded to new ideas. I just couldn't make the leap.
It seemed well written, just not for me. Keep writing, maybe the next one will grab me by the balls.
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