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Please, stop
You are almost certainly a male, obsessed with huge (usually unsightly) breasts. Any woman that has a 44DD breast measurement is either grossly fat and (again) a generally unsightly woman, or a six foot five inch raw boned amazon (think Janet Reno). The numbers in a breast measurement refer to the chest size immediately beneath the breast (the band size of a bra). Most women of normal size have band sizes between 34 inches and 38 inches.
The letters refer to the size of the breasts beyond the band size. A relates to 1 inch, B refers to 2 inches nd so on. DD breasts are entirely unnatural 5 or 6 inch globs of unsupported fat.
Please, people, get real. 38C breasts are far more than a mouthful and much more realistic
Then there's your grammar. I only read the first three paragraphs (u to the point of the 44DD part. You might have a decent tale here, but seriously need an editor. Particularly as it comes to elements conversation.
Please don't submit again until you learn to write.
44DDs
To the previous commenter: You need to seriously watch more porn.
44DDs are lovely excellent breasts on a real woman.
To the author: Never heard of triple D's? Don't think so small.
Another example of
breasts larger than the IQ
hey them there big hooters
Big hooters has pleasure a many of men and females .Just got to love them, enjoy story
I heard Jim, my husband tell Bill to come in for a beer.
The co-worker drops the husband off in front of the house, which implies at the street. The wife is sunning in the back yard, behind a privacy fence, and yet she's able to hear her husband invite the guy in for a beer. Is the street 5 feet from the back yard?
You write that they look out the back window to see the wife sunning herself. Then you write that the co-worker asks where the wife is, and the husband tells him she's in the back yard, sunning herself. This after you just finish telling us they saw her doing just that when they looked out the back window. Please think this stuff through before you post.
JUST SHAKING MY HEAD
First off, PLEASE STOP, you are obviously a female with most likely a very small 32a bust since the majority of your criticism is with the "certainly male" fascination of the female breasts.
Second, with your complaints limited to views of the breast size and grammar you seem to approve of cheating cunts, which puts you in a classless slut or slut wanna be group if you haven't cheated on your man yet, just a matter of time?
Third how the hell is this a Loving Wife story, just another piece of shit FANTASY STORY of a cheating slut AND a whoring best (phony) friend who could not keep it in his pants. Why is it that a large number of male writers here are so into their skank wives cheating on them.
I agree with the PLEASE STOP but for the reason that you are just another limp dick cuckold that gets off on a woman and his best friend doing him dirty. There are already enough of them.
No comments...
No comments...just 1*
My Guess
One commentator says you're a man and another says you're a woman. My guess is you're a teenage boy. Who else throws their beer can across the yard instead of binning it?
Please stop with the 44DDs....
It shows that you're a guy, and one who doesn't know how bra sizes work. At least you just said his dick was "huge", and not 14 inches.
Also, After Jim left, Jim took a swig of his beer. I'm assuming you meant Bill. The other valid criticisms from readers shows you badly need an editor.
1*
illiterate shit.
5 stars
Ignore 'Anonymous' comments. I enjoyed your well written, realistic and interesting story.
WTF
# 1
Clearly written by a eunuch
The writing style is a dead giveaway.
Whoa!
No, no, no, go back to pickup basketball games. You really need to work on your writing. Did you write an outline first to organize your work? Think not. Get an editor and a proofreader. Also an English teacher. Damn!
awesome
This is an awesome story cant wait for the second one, for the people complaining about the writing, get a grip she Ix not st school.
WIMP!!!!
This type of story always leave me with a disgusted feeling in the pit of my stomach. How a man can write a story about his cheating whore of a wife letting her husbands BEST friend fuck her, and try to pass it off as just a suburb everyday thing mahes me sick. Get some balls and write this again but with the husband catching them, stomping the best friend near death, and kicking her ass out on the street in her bikini thst night. Throw the rest of her clothes out right after.
Huh?
They looked out the back window and saw me reclined on a beach towel with the pitcher and a glass on a tray beside me.
Bill said, "Where's Sally?"
LOL
Was this supposed to me funny? Stupid is a better word. What is it with some of these illiterate comments? Did you guys even get any kind of education.
Where do these writers come from? Outer space?
Why doesn't literotica make writers do a disclaimer
I stay away from some titlesort and sometimes look at the end of the story. Why haven't figured out that cuckholding situation stories need their own category. Many people hate cuckhold situations. A disclaimer would help reading a story and have having to look for signature words, to know if you want read the whole story. I have not created an account because I really have to search for stories I like. I understand there is a formula used, but I am looking for erotic not crazy or sick. There are some good writers and some sick writers.
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