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A Tale of Two Sisters Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous01/02/17

That's it?

This has the promise of a great story, but one page leaves a lot to be desired. I can't even rate it because it's not even a complete story. Please flesh it out some more.

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by Jasont20001/02/17

it has potential

This story needs to be longer. I understand this is chapter 1 of it but you needed to add more to it before posting. Also can you fix the name mistake you stated Kim takes out her phone to show a photo but it's not her phone.

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