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wow! -73-
Is it poetry?
Is it not?
Does it matter
which - No
Does it matter
Yes
This is a marvelously complex
beautiful
piece of writing.
The kind that
can/should be
read in small sittings
savored, sucked
for nourishment
and pure joy.
Please remove -30-
very QRK
QRO & QRQ
AN ABSOLUTE MUST READ!
absolute
descriptive joy, I would hope that someday my as-of-yet unborn grandkids might find this as assignment in their Literature class, belongs in a Norton if you ask me :) wonderful, cant even choose my favorite part!!
read this, if you enjoy reading at all :)
I told you...
... in private, and now in public. This is just gorgeous masterful stuff. An absolute masterpiece of language and thought -- perhaps the best thing I have read anywhere, in a long time!!!
Well
if YDD and Tara like it...it must be good.
Seriously, I am left speechless
I wanted it to go on
I wanted to stay there and see and smell and hear all those things over and over
You are a talented man my brother
Thank you for sharing your art here
breathtaking!!
i've slowly been making my way through the writers here, i picked a good day to come read you. i could have read on..this was brilliant.
this line stood out..
"There are moments like this in all lives; charting the tacks and heels of sailing ships, no matter how ragged the canvas."
i will return, i must!
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