Interesting and good start for a first story. I hope you will continue to write.
Good start. You need to take it slow and develop the story and not from here right to bed.
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Interesting and good start for a first story. I hope you will continue to write.
interesting indeed.
Good start. You need to take it slow and develop the story and not from here right to bed.
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